Dear Edwin

great game! cant believe how long took me to play, but it was a good experience, i love rpg maker and seeing mixed with a interactive novel, was rlly cool! also the great art, and animations made the world of the game expand so much even if it was on a few scenarios, it rlly gave the vibe! thanks for the game! (the music was fire too)

I love this game. I do wish it was longer.

Beautiful game. I love how different choices changes some dialogue, but there's not really a difference besides the outcome of who gets to say what. 

The extra residential section seems unnecessary. I can only assume it's there to establish the steampunk vibes and the detail is astounding. It did however throw me off my first play through when I had to find the victim's apartment because (1) that section wasn't closed off even though the train section was and (2) it was the first place I checked since it easily matched the description of a place where the victim would live as well as how they died. In short, I did not except a tiny one-story looking balcony to be the scene of the crime. I still wouldn't shun the beautiful graphics for that section since it did help establish the game's universe, but did not by any means involve the actual story. 

Same thing could apply for the train station I suppose. A cut scene would have sufficed since the actual area had no use (other than that odd bit with the mouse). 

If the purpose of having all that walking space was for players to get immersed in that world, there would have been other ways to do that without creating those unused areas. If detail was what you were going for, mannerisms, local slang, and even terminology to name a few would equally captivate players. After all, you did say this was "a story focused game", and dialogue is a really important aspect of stories which would have been incorporated anyways. 

By absolutely no means am I trying to discourage all of the hardworking people that made this game, because the game is fabulous! I'm just hoping some constructive criticism and suggestions would help improve games like this because if quality and effort like what I just saw got fine tuned, it could make games that were good, become far greater. 

Interesting story with amazing characters. Loved this game a lot! <3

A short, fun game with a very well knitted story! The music is delightful and the way the story is painted beautifully in front of you as you play the game. I'm in love with the cosy sad town and it's good people. I hope that there will be more games in the same world.

I finished the game an with all honesty I liked it,
and even recommend it to everybody who reads this.

It was short yet fun, and a great storyline, and custom art. 

But I do wish, that you could enter more buildings, but that's just me personally. 

Why is the title reminding me of another game.. OH! Hello Lazy! If you created this game with an RPG/RTP engine(I expect you to), please make an version without it! So if you do we'll just have to download the an engine! Like RPG VX ACE! I'm sorry if this is like, calling you dumb.. But please make it if you can!

so nice game:)

Well I loved this! Charming characters, lovely backgrounds and an intriguingly whimsical story. Really looking forward to getting to the end of it, and I've voted for this game in the jam too!

Keep up the great work everyone!